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1. RE: POST YOUR POEMS HERE
Sep 14 2009, 2:25 PM EDT
When the sky turns blue,The fate comes true. With might and main we struggle, To free ourselves from the juggle. The juggle of eternal diversity, Though the foe finds it serendipity. Like morons they laugh, Like septic tanks we barf. The diversity of humanity, The serendipity of brutality. How I hate this earth, Full of cruel mirth. CURSE YOU ALL IN YOUR NEXT LIFE MAY BE YOUR GOAL TO SURVIVE! 1 out of 1 found this valuable. Do you? |
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2. RE: POST YOUR POEMS HERE
Sep 15 2009, 8:22 PM EDT
6.5/10To see the heavens in a wild flower And the world in a grain of sand, To hold enternyti in an hour And infinity in your hand. (To be continued . . . . *Dramatic music*) 1 out of 1 found this valuable. Do you? |
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3. RE: POST YOUR POEMS HERE
Sep 16 2009, 10:23 AM EDT
"6.5/10"Aww... come on! It was better than that. Do you find this valuable? |
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5. RE: POST YOUR POEMS HERE
Sep 16 2009, 10:57 PM EDT
(continued...)To hear heavens power in the winds mumble And Earths secrets in the wipers of the land, To see the oceans secrets in a drop of rain And Life in a candles a single tongue of flame. Inocence and Wisdom. Do you find this valuable? |
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7. RE: POST YOUR POEMS HERE
Sep 18 2009, 5:53 PM EDT
wrong. Its a different kind of poem. I believed used popularly in the middle east. It has no rhyme. It CAN'T rhyme. yet its a poem because it says it is.
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8. RE: POST YOUR POEMS HERE
Sep 19 2009, 1:11 AM EDT
Hmm... did you get this from the middle east?
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9. RE: POST YOUR POEMS HERE
Sep 19 2009, 12:31 PM EDT
the poem? No. The format? Yes.
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10. RE: POST YOUR POEMS HERE
Sep 20 2009, 7:30 AM EDT
The end.Come on, Dragon, this is a nice thread. Please don't end it. 0 out of 1 found this valuable. Do you? |
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11. RE: POST YOUR POEMS HERE
Sep 21 2009, 10:08 PM EDT
Well then you post a poem. I am not gona fill this thing with 30 pages worth of my poems.
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12. RE: POST YOUR POEMS HERE
Sep 25 2009, 2:15 PM EDT
| Post edited: Oct 8 2009, 7:51 AM EDT
Poem coming after 5 posts...
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AVMidian |
13. RE: POST YOUR POEMS HERE
Sep 25 2009, 4:38 PM EDT
Dragon, the beginning of your poem sounds like the beginning of one of William Blake's works. (To see a World in a Grain of Sand And a Heaven in a Wild Flower,Hold Infinity in the palm of your hand And Eternity in an hour.) However, I enjoyed your poem very much. Keep Writing!Do you find this valuable? |
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14. RE: POST YOUR POEMS HERE
Sep 25 2009, 10:41 PM EDT
I am. Thanks. It was based in William Blake. I have about 3 different self made versions of his.
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AVMidian |
15. RE: POST YOUR POEMS HERE
Sep 25 2009, 11:39 PM EDT
I've done the same kind of thing with a few of Poe's works. One was actually an assignment but I enjoyed it so much that I did some more in my own time.
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freedragon10022 |
16. RE: POST YOUR POEMS HERE
Sep 25 2009, 11:49 PM EDT
I also have a couple of not so happy ones.
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17. RE: POST YOUR POEMS HERE
Sep 26 2009, 4:05 AM EDT
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Told you it was coming after 5 posts. HaHa...I'm psychic. Here's another one:It's not a day It's not a night It's just the light. I sit by the bay Enjoying the sight From a height. The day is so gay That when I leave the bight I feel like I'm out for another sight. When the sun shines its ray I think it so white But it's only bright. It's the price you shall have to pay So why don't you fight With some might. Do you find this valuable? |
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18. RE: POST YOUR POEMS HERE
Sep 26 2009, 1:52 PM EDT
7/10. Nice format. bad ending. Do you find this valuable? |
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19. RE: POST YOUR POEMS HERE
Sep 26 2009, 1:59 PM EDT
Here's a more melancholic poem.Song of the dead. Above our heads the chaos rages Struggle aches through the ages There the striffe will never cease But here bellow we rest in peace Were the tides of time swamp memory Our sunless prison finally makes us free The gem-glow lights our earthy walls and dragons guard our shining halls Do you find this valuable? |
