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greengiant89
greengiant89
emerald
Aug 9 2009, 3:10 PM EDT | Post edited: Aug 9 2009, 3:10 PM EDT
i have had a good read of the story. other than the usual edit and stuff very good story definately up and coming. 1 little thing what age are you aiming the story at as for teenager around 14 it may be a bit confusing all the flicking between characters and dates so maybe spread that out abit
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